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In my heart Oh! dear,
You and me are near,
You say not but I hear,
We may talk but with fear,
You were once my peer,
Your every word I bear,
Together in joyful tears,
Alone in painful shears,
I wanted to know you more,
Ready to uncover the masks I wore,
Showed you signs you didn’t reply,
Reminded you of times you made me cry,
Silently waiting for a chance to speak,
Forcefully making a smiling streak,
Losing my patience but being calm,
Heart going cold, but keeping it warm,
I still remember those moments of joy,
When we laughed at matters ignoring ‘where’ and ‘why’.
I know your every like and choice,
I know when you’re mad and when you’re nice,
I know exactly your ‘priceless’ price,
I even know your softest slice,
You may not speak your heart out loud,
You may not find what I have found.
With your strand of charm,
Holding your strong arm,
You bring me out,
From the echoes of shout.
Maybe I was wrong,
or expected too long,
Maybe I was tricked,
To have you picked,
Even knowing you as the only one,
Today ‘YOU’ ARE STILL ‘SOMEONE’…..!!!
©Varun K. Sharma
Goodness ! I honestly dont have perfect words to describe it but seriously you expressed my feelings in your poem better than I did. ! When I was reading your poem, it was like a flashback in my mind.
” Silently waiting for a chance to speak,
Forcefully making a smiling streak,
Losing my patience but being calm,
Heart going cold, but keeping it warm,”…perfect lines for my feelings !
Maybe I was wrong,
or expected too long,
Maybe I was tricked,
To have you picked,
Even knowing you as the only one,
Today ‘YOU’ ARE STILL ‘SOMEONE’…..!!!……..I love these lines..they are perfectly expressing my feelings right now !
Thanks a lot Varun ! you made me decide my most important decision in life for which I was so confused. Thanks ! 😀
and this is the bestest comment to my poem…! Thanks a lot 🙂
Hehe…its all my pleasure by the way ! 😀 I really wanted to tell you that I was very happy reading this poem 😀
outstanding varun……..wat a poem??? its simply superb….wenevr i read ur poem, i relate it wth my life…..my little genius brthr……hats off……..
Reblogged this on The Dainty Damsel and commented:
The bestest poem ever about love ! About those unexpressed feelings buried in our hearts, for which we are neither able to move on nor look back ! About those deep surges that we feel when we are in a one-sided love ! Thanks Varun K. Sharma ! 😀
Hey I re-blogged your post ! Do check it out. 😀
http://thedaintydamsel.wordpress.com/2012/04/09/you-are-still-someone/
Good one, but I suppose something was missing. 😐 still the ending was great. Keep writing.
Your poems always make me think Varun.
This is a very good poem.
Well done!
You left me speechless with this one dear… so beautiful one!
every single word just touched or maybe it was coz i was imagining it as i went through.
Yes, its lovely when someone knows your every single detail but one shuld even value the person coz he doesn’t get to know you from curiosity. Its because he truly cares and we rarely get to meet someone who does it truly.
*claps in admiration 😀
Speachless! you are really a genius!! AMazing poem like always! you rock! and this poem of yours is describing some deep hidden feelings that are going across your mind these days. (this is what i feel) GREAt work again!
You crafted these words so prefectly. Nice talent.
Wonderful Varun, Its always good to have ‘Someone’ within our lives,And this was a wonderful expression… ~Sue
Wow! Its amaaaaazing bro and when I read it…it sounds to me like I am singing not reading.
Amazing work! Truly Hatts Off….
waoooo Varun…. urs words so amazing.. heart touching…